I like the added clarity and solid surfacing, but I would be sure to define the top glass surface of the greenhouse from the reflections of the radius sections on the side as we look to the top. I also agree with the general comment from Jin...(and thanks for adding your comment by the way). The scales of your photo reference is off with regard to the people and their shadows and lighting are not a match to the environment as much as they should be. As for the design, and your intended function ou described, you need to show access to the greenhouse, and the store for seeds and fertilizer you mentioned. Clean the perspective top edge of the right greenhouse as well. As for the wide shot of the station, you will need to clean up the perspective of the lip/overhang around the leading edge of the terminal. Please use better reference and a more interesting series of garden aspects to the lower plaza...it is rough, and not very progressive with regard to its use of space. Think of adding a field of solar, combined use space in these open areas. You need to do this, and add in interior shot to describe the way you envisioning the greenhouse, terminal hall, or similar area. MG
looks great!! one thing, I would put the side frames a little offset from the exact edge on the ellipses(top one), but looks great as it is too.
ReplyDeleteI like the added clarity and solid surfacing, but I would be sure to define the top glass surface of the greenhouse from the reflections of the radius sections on the side as we look to the top. I also agree with the general comment from Jin...(and thanks for adding your comment by the way). The scales of your photo reference is off with regard to the people and their shadows and lighting are not a match to the environment as much as they should be. As for the design, and your intended function ou described, you need to show access to the greenhouse, and the store for seeds and fertilizer you mentioned. Clean the perspective top edge of the right greenhouse as well. As for the wide shot of the station, you will need to clean up the perspective of the lip/overhang around the leading edge of the terminal. Please use better reference and a more interesting series of garden aspects to the lower plaza...it is rough, and not very progressive with regard to its use of space. Think of adding a field of solar, combined use space in these open areas. You need to do this, and add in interior shot to describe the way you envisioning the greenhouse, terminal hall, or similar area. MG
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